Assignment Four – Corrections
I felt I researched this assignment well, as well as
connecting it to my own work, but perhaps I did not do so well with regards to
the quality of my images.
I have taken on board my tutors comments with regards to
time, which will be shown in my next assignment.
Here are the following are the corrections I have made in
response to my tutors feedback.
Camden Market
Firstly I feel that I need to clarify that the other
twelve publishable images are not “rejects” per say, I simply felt they were
not as strong as the other images. So I followed the assignment directive and
included them in to the final draft.
With
regards to the image of the pole I have took another image which may have been
better for the assignment.
I am not sure if this is a stronger image or not, I did
not include this image as I wanted the people to be more prominent in the image
as well as them walking on the road.
I
have another image that may fit better in to the assignment directive, but I
was in two minds whether or not to include it.
I think this may have been a better image for me to
include due to the light, the people and the vertical lines.
I did not include this image in the assignment, as I
wanted to have just one image of the road in my assignment, which included a close
up image of the flyering that happens in Camden.
Regents Park
Here
is an image to show the low dappled light and people who are closer to the
foreground.
I initially did not include this image as I wanted to make
the children anonymous, but alas, as children always do, they moved to fast.
I did manage to get an image where they were blurred, but
unfortunately the whole image was blurred, as I was trying to get the correct
angle for the composition. I did not include this image as it was not as sharp
as I would have liked.
Piccadilly
Circus
I
agree with the Break-dancer image so instead of using the cropped image, here
is another one that I wanted to include, which may be a bit better composition
wise.
I like this image as you really feel like you are ‘amongst’
the crowd, I did not include it as the image is not as sharp as I would have
liked, also, I feel the woman’s head in the foreground may have been a bit too
distracting.
Learning Log
I see what my tutor means about having to open the months
on the side of my blog, however, I have been unable to change it.
The only way I can change it is to make it worse, as I
cannot change the complete format of the archive post in blogger.
This blog site is a suggested site that the OCA has said that
their students could use.
I
have however, listed each title differently to make it easier to access, so the
whole exercise and assignment title is visible.
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